Poster: I like the fact you've chosen a landscape form of presenting your poster, I think this works really well as your artist is situated to the right and the majority of the text sits on the opposite side. The use of a white background also works well to help the text stand out, the use of star ratings also ties in well with your genre of music. The photograph of your artist is well lit and framed, the presentation/styling of your artist suits the genre of your music. Even better if... the 'Poppy Mills' typography was a more illustrative font so it stands out more compared to the rest of the text, however I understand why you have chosen more a more subtle font as it ensures the image of your artist is the main focal point of the advertisement.
DigiPak: Your digipak and poster work really well together, they both use the same conventions which also suit your genre well. The fact you have used the same picture of your artist on your advertisement and digipak means that an audience can link them both together and recognise them as a brand/product. I like the way your track listing is laid out. I also like the use of a panorama in your digipak, it makes it more interesting and again works with the style/genre of your music.
Even better if... the barcode on the back of the digipak was slightly smaller and without the white background, a more obvious colour scheme would also improve the overall look of your digipak, however I think it looks professional and suits your artist 'Poppy Mills' and genre of music well.
Poster:
ReplyDeleteI like the fact you've chosen a landscape form of presenting your poster, I think this works really well as your artist is situated to the right and the majority of the text sits on the opposite side. The use of a white background also works well to help the text stand out, the use of star ratings also ties in well with your genre of music. The photograph of your artist is well lit and framed, the presentation/styling of your artist suits the genre of your music.
Even better if... the 'Poppy Mills' typography was a more illustrative font so it stands out more compared to the rest of the text, however I understand why you have chosen more a more subtle font as it ensures the image of your artist is the main focal point of the advertisement.
DigiPak:
Your digipak and poster work really well together, they both use the same conventions which also suit your genre well. The fact you have used the same picture of your artist on your advertisement and digipak means that an audience can link them both together and recognise them as a brand/product. I like the way your track listing is laid out. I also like the use of a panorama in your digipak, it makes it more interesting and again works with the style/genre of your music.
Even better if... the barcode on the back of the digipak was slightly smaller and without the white background, a more obvious colour scheme would also improve the overall look of your digipak, however I think it looks professional and suits your artist 'Poppy Mills' and genre of music well.