There is a slight relationship between music and visual at the start as the sound is that of a music box which is traditionally associated with small children and you have the broken childs toy on screen.
With the section about money think about the money tree and the saying 'money doesn't grow on trees'.
Try and add key vocabularly like amplification and illustration, you'll need these terms to get a top mark in both the coursework AND the exam. If you really want that A then those terms (and these http://mrsmitha2musicvideo.blogspot.co.uk/2013/07/music-video-analysis-theory-andrew.html)
Just as Hack needs to focus more on mise en scene, so do you.
Overall this is very good BUT I know you are determined to get an A AND I know you are A LOT MORE ABLE than you like people (including me) to think. Try and make those improvements and speak to me if you get stuck.
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ReplyDeleteThere is a slight relationship between music and visual at the start as the sound is that of a music box which is traditionally associated with small children and you have the broken childs toy on screen.
ReplyDeleteWith the section about money think about the money tree and the saying 'money doesn't grow on trees'.
Try and add key vocabularly like amplification and illustration, you'll need these terms to get a top mark in both the coursework AND the exam. If you really want that A then those terms (and these http://mrsmitha2musicvideo.blogspot.co.uk/2013/07/music-video-analysis-theory-andrew.html)
Just as Hack needs to focus more on mise en scene, so do you.
Overall this is very good BUT I know you are determined to get an A AND I know you are A LOT MORE ABLE than you like people (including me) to think. Try and make those improvements and speak to me if you get stuck.