Saturday, 7 December 2013
Feedback on Kellys digipak and poster;
Feedback;
Magazine Advertisement;
In terms of the poster, it is very simple and mininalistic. I think that the two colours that you have used, black and white contrast well together, and link well the type of genre. You have presented your genre well of mental/rock music, and the reference of the cross sign with the page title links really well together. I think it has been very well thought out, and I think you can take the title different ways. The use of minimal text on your poster works well as the main focal point is the title, and then the cross.
In two of your posters you've written "There is hell" which obviously relates with the song title, and i like how this is well thought about. You have put the cross slightly to the left, and not directly in the centre, but it is well laid out and very sophisticated.
In terms of what could be improved is maybe bring the red into the other two posters to show more of a colour palette.
Digipak;
I think the feedback that i have made about the poster, you can also apply to the digipak. The colour palette is well thought about, however the red could of been used more often. Although the use of the red makes the white stand out more, and look more polished. I like how you've used the same image for your front cover of the digipak as of your poster, but tweaked it a little by adding the red font underneath the title. This allows your target audience to be able to easily recognise your digipak from your poster. You have used the same image of one of the panels, but taken away two of the shapes. This shows that you've kept the same design throughout. I like the way you have designed the back cover and how your track list has been centralised. I can't comment on any improvements I think you could make, as I feel you've produced a well presented piece of work.
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